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True Love

Heart racing,
Blood just flowing,
Lightly to my head,
His touch so inviting,
His kiss so sweet,
I knew there was somebody,
Somewhere and I have been waiting so long,
I just feel that we belong,
This road is promising to be long,
And full of hope and life,
And one day I think,
That if this world turns cold,
I will still,
And always stand up for him,
He'll be there for me,
And I'll one day be his wife,
One day,
He'll tell me it will be ok again,
Days will be longer,
I'll be sure that he'll be with forever,
To know he's my true love,
Please don't take him away,
Please don't walk away,
Please tell me you'll stay,
Beauty so divine,
I will let his life shine,
I will be there for him.....



Author notes

Well, this is for...me I guess. I mean I wrote it because of me. The love I feel but this is a painless kind of love. Well, the poem says there no pain and saying he's my everything. That I am in love with him and longing for his love.

Are you this inlove like me?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • HopelessPoet1087
    December 23, 2008

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    this poem is really adorable... and i know how you feel.... i feel like this too... i love all your new poetry shelby... youre an amazing poet, just like i remembered you as... <3

  • D.Wolf
    December 23, 2008

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    Love is twisted and illusional. But we can't live without it. Cold fear, but riveting desperation. Nicely driven poem, I liked it alot. Great write.

    Sincerely,
    ShySuicidalWolf