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I miss you sandy paul goins.2nd christmas youve been gone.

Dont cry for me when im gone
Those were your words
Well I am sorry this is so painful
The tears just roll out

It feels like yesterday
You died and I lost a dad.


You loved Christmas time.
It was baby Jesus' birthday.
And you celebrated.
Boy did you celebrate.

Christmas with you was about love and Family
Laughter was a virtue

I miss you Dad.
Sometimes I call your old cell phone
Because you are still on the answering machine.
And thats the only piece of you I still have.
The only thing left with your voice and your laugh.

im sorry i cry
But daddy I miss you and the pain is still here.



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  • St. Poet
    June 16

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    Ohhh.... This one even makes me wana cry...

    I think this poem is great just the way it is. i cant think of anything you can do to make this one better. You did a very good job.

    Im sorry about you dad. You have my condolences

    Skippy