Love, a simple word
That we, beings, show through motion
Love, itself is misheard
Falling in love with a simple potion
Love as a red rose blooms with wonder
Words, no, can't decribe the way I feel
This feeling will take me under
To a place that is actually real
Saying nor showing love to you
Is not so clear
For me, to make my love true
I have to pay a price, my dear
Everything has a price
Even love does
So take my advice
Because...
Love helps us stay as one
Life helps make it last
I know when this is all done
The love that I got from you never passed
Author notes
"Meaningless as a moth with its wing nailed to a wall" - The Witching Hour
Mother, aunt, or grandmother is fine with me. When I chose this quote, I took it a bit further when you said you love love, the feeling. Love is all we need along with life. So, I hope I become your a part of your family. If not, that's okay.
Favorite song: When Can I see You by. Babyface. He's an R&B singer. I hope you like this song.
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Comments
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I like this poem. It has smooth rhyming that's continuous and the idea behind it is nice. Love does come with a price, you just have to figure out if it's worth it. You have talent, keep writing. Thank you for taking time and entering my contest, good luck.
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This is a very nice poem, but is a little long for my contest. Thank you for entering, and keep on writing!
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Cool...
Soft, tender & endearing...
Great narrative, rhythm, rhyme & flow...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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ah yes love does have a price but so worth it, even the pain.
Wonderful poem on love, I really like the last line.
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I DO love this!! Seriously!! The rhyming is soo amazing! The idea behind it!! I love it! *if you can't tell by my random shouting and hyperactivity, then I'm trying to say that I love it*
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