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I Live To Be With You

Desperation,
Feeling butterflies that flutter.
Simply in love,
How your voice makes mine stutter.
Sleepwalking,
Traveling through the silver lining in each rain cloud.
Staring at your gorgeous smile,
Oh, how I want to scream out loud…

I was torn
When I first met you.
But now I’m strong,
And brave enough to be able to
Speak my mind,
I live for you.

Paranoia,
Men like you do not exist.
Childish anger,
You refuse to make me quit.
Drugging me up,
With your charming ecstasy.
Fulfilling,
All my girly fantasies.
You are my greatest dream…

I was torn
When I first met you.
But now I’m strong,
And brave enough to be able to
Speak my mind,
I live for you.

So tired,
Of being all alone.
Opening your arms wide out,
They feel so much like home.
Whispering,
The small phrase “te amo”.
Yet no matter how I say it to you,
It will never be enough to explain
And so, as the story goes…

I was torn
When I first met you.
But now I’m strong,
And brave enough to be able to
Speak my mind,
I live to be with you.

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To Dani, he is the hero in this story. I love you, My Baby Boy. Merry Christmas!

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  • this is utterfly beautiful....


  • Dani M.paz
    June 16

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    i actually forgot we had a fight in x-maz,im sorry princesa,i loved the poem seem the first time,sorry i didnt mentioned it,i love you.


  • CharleeBoy
    May 16

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    Very well written, let's just say this feeling is a great one... and I am glad that you write about it so strongly. Once again, good work :]]


  • meoncloud9
    May 16

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    nice poem.. very emotional.. something that really touched me was 'So tired,
    Of being all alone.
    Opening your arms wide out,
    They feel so much like home.'
    Love is lovely.. lol.

  • love is not absent

    it is right here in your poem

  • Awwww.
    Reminds me of my feelings.
    "So tired of being all alone." Reminded me of things he said.
    And I loved the repeating stanza.

    Oh and the paranoia part...I liked that.

  • crosscountry07
    December 23, 2008

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    This is so sweet Morgan Kennedy! I hope Dani has seen this. I wish I could feel this way again. Maybe someday. Dani's a lucky guy. Have an awesome Christmas! -Liz

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