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The Christmas blues

She tries so hard
Only to miss the goal once again
Yet its nothing new
Just routine.

Surrounded by the joy and bliss
Of friends both old and new,
As they gather round
For the holiday cheer.

While she waits in the corner,
Waiting to awakened
From her nightmare.

Watching history repeat itself,
Yet this time with a new height of failure.
Her high hopes of dreams
Dashed away.

Along with her happiness
As she nears christmas with a dreary outlook
Just as the year before.


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  • luckypoet7
    December 22, 2008
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    i love the poem so much it really says alot