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Not Good Enough

Even when I had the chance,
I refused to go and selfishly drag you around
because someone else made it all feel “right.”

It’s been a month and the tears inside me
haven’t leaked but I know they’re coming.
I know you never wanted to make me cry…

It’s hard to believe what went on…
you kicked me down and never saw
all the little things I secretly knew.

I’m here, stuck in this awful place
where I’m forced everyday to see your face
and realize I have nothing left to think over.
(I wish I didn't want you)

I’ve never been the one to hold on,
but forgetting isn't in my vocabulary…

No matter what, life goes on,
but I still wish even then you wanted me…

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choppy, cruddy. the usual.

Gimme' some feed back, please

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  • nonsexynerd
    March 26

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    that was... really good. it touched me on a personal note because i'm going through that right now and have been for a while.


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    February 23

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    It's okay to cry and it's okay to let go, but that doesn't mean that either of them will be easy. Often, it takes time.


  • xXBipolarXx
    December 28, 2008

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    Hm.

    Who is this about? Your um...sadness(?) (my vocab like, escaped) is appearent. Good poem. Kudos podo


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    December 24, 2008

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    Good Job

    great write i love the emotion in this piece amazing job i love the whole thing nothing to complain about it sounds like youve been hurt i love how you put it together well good job keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • Jaybles
    December 24, 2008
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    You are good enough. You're more than good enough. I'm sorry you've been hurt.

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