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Try Your Wings

Try Your Wings

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

 

Listening to the silent pulse,

penning the joy of a flying blue bird.

Dreaming for the silent ones that are afraid,

to strip the flesh bare and let you see the face of pain.

Consumers rarely look into the wrack of themselves,

and buy their own untold story for half price.

As your ego is sentimentally hungry,

starving to see the silent fingerprints

from you staring out the window.

I saw my own tears pour,

washing along the shore then I

lost all toughness and hardcore.

I ran and I ran along the beach until I lost energy,

and I lowered my head and spoke with my father.

Not caring that you the pedestrian

find me bizarre and strange.

But the truth of my pain isn’t for your observation ,

and you don’t have the answers to free me,

are remove the cup of destruction

that has embryo inside of me.

Take my shoes off my feet and walk my years,

and take my experiences of tasting death

and then you will see your lucky not to be me,

but I am lucky not to be you.

Because your make up covers your truth,

and my bare skin displays my truth.

Try your wings,

and watch the release of you uplifting the burden

was better than wearing it in a stolen

copyright tale that you actually don’t own.

I released pain,

and I gained a joy that any sarcastic remark

can’t steal but enlighten my thrill.

I feed starvation and emptied constipation ,

Did you hear what I said?

Let me repeat that I feed starvation

and emptied constipation I repeat,

as I spread the word ,

leaving this thought stain.

 

I'am The Truth

Writer's Block Stages

Trapped Rage

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • darell
    December 27, 2008

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    Awe Inspiring!

    A very poignant piece that strikes
    the cords of every emotion.
    I was captivated by the truth of your
    bold expressions. Seeking answers in
    the wellsprings of your melancholy heart.
    You're a deep well filled with potent waters.
    Some bitter and some sweet.
    I believe this side of your writing is
    worth pursuing. Good work my love.
    Your friend and fan forever,darell


  • mzmikki
    December 23, 2008

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    This is beautifully written!

    Take my shoes off my feet and walk my years,

    and take my experiences of tasting death

    and then you will see your lucky not to be me,

    but I am lucky not to be you.

    Because your make up covers your truth,

    and my bare skin displays my truth

    I love these lines cuz they are so true! Great job honey, but you already know that cuz you do a great job all the time!


  • Boxingboy
    December 23, 2008

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    very good poem

    i'm bookmarking this one it's awsome

    and you just gotta PUBLISH THIS YOU HAVE TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      December 23, 2008
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      you sucker thanks baby i shall be by later to catch up on ur reads my thoughts are like everywhere i want to be clear when i come read ok


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 23, 2008

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    I love this hon another deep write from you that I enjoyed so much! You did a wonderful job on this

    Take my shoes off my feet and walk my years,
    and take my experiences of tasting death
    and then you will see your lucky not to be me,
    but I am lucky not to be you.
    Because your make up covers your truth,
    and my bare skin displays my truth.


  • ADORExo
    December 23, 2008
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    You are AMAZING! I seriously think you could publish a book of poetry. This was truely beautiful, almost every other line I wanted to copy down and be like "I loved this line _______" Although, out of everything I did LOVE, my favorite thing that added more emotion then all else was the "Did you hear what I said? Let me repeat" it added to everything beautifully :


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 22, 2008

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    You're Amazing....

    ...and so is everything you write. I like your style, as you throw my eyes against the walls of your heart and make me see ever so clearly...as you bleed openly, and honesty overflows with the soul that soars trying her wings... Love ya sweet one! This moved me, deeply.


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    December 22, 2008
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    I like this style alot of deep thought ma.


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      December 22, 2008
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      lol yea it is the thing with my writing majority in some cases are true i did run the beach and i do speak to my father openly i feel comfortable having conversation with him. most have to cook up you a bunch a bull in a write for online fan review are some popularity crap! me i give you a peek into my mind when i write thats why your jewels is THE TRUTH~


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 22, 2008

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    BRAVO!!

    Jewels, lady you are once again laying it down on some new level tip!! wow this is powerful lady!! good work very different from you, yet so you..


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      December 22, 2008
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      thanks hon. yep switchen it was going to save it for next year but my style is being formatted by many others i like to be one sound not a crowd lol thanks for peppin that you are so sweet

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