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To Clarify

You are not beautiful
Even I must admit
In the beauty that's measured by looks
But I love you even more for your face that's aglow
That passion for life that you show
You are not charming
Even I'll tell you that
In the sense that is shallow and sheik
But I love you even more for your laugh and your smile
It makes me feel life is worthwhile
You are not beautiful
The world would declare:
"You just haven't got what it takes"
But you make me love like the sun makes plants grow
You're the most beautiful person I know

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  • Awake now
    December 22, 2008

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    Oh mein Gott!! I love it. danke for intering it's just what I wanted ...
    Freiden,
    Liebe,
    und Tokio Hotel
    ~Kiwi