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Isn't It Lovely

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My feet are numb,

I can't feel my toes.

 

 

Isn't it lovely?

Ya! I suppose.

 

 

Broke my shovel,

snow's up to my knees.

 

 

Isn't it lovely?

Ya! a frosty freeze.

 

 

Two hours it took me to get to the store,

broke my nails on the frozen car door.

 

 

Isn't it lovely?

Ya! sure.

 

 

Neighbors snowblowing from morning to night,

Man's insane; he's looking for a fight.

 

 

Isn't it lovely?

Ya! Ya! right.

 

 

 

 

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  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    February 12

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    Awe....

    Funny! Winter isn't that bad! But I understand the frustration of it. It was a funny way of expressing how a lot of snow can be taxing at times.

    Nice job, and funny.


  • Denerica silver member
    December 23, 2008
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    Hurry up Spring...loved the poking fun at how some of us say we love the snow scenery. Blessings


  • Hikari Lady
    December 23, 2008

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    Lolz, this was so funny and wonderfully written. I enjoyed it so much. Pity, I love winter with its frosty breaths.
    Best of luck in the contest.

    God bless
    ~Noor


  • Malabu
    December 23, 2008
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    this is cute... yeah and it's lovely...still i hate winter...lol great poem kate

    mmal

  • goalsv
    December 23, 2008
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    LOL, I know the feeling. Just had a good snow storm. All I did all day was shovel.


  • Yemassee gold member
    December 23, 2008
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    You must live on the other side of my neighbor because yesterday he was out all day snow blowing, but he plowed out from behind my car so I'm not complaining.

    Yes, winter is as lovely as a kick in the head!

    I like the recurring, "isn't it lovely?" couplets.

    This was fun, and those bunnies, they always make me smile. See! Thanks for entering the contest!


  • fadingintooblivion
    December 23, 2008

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    Two hours it took me to get to the store,

    broke my nails on the frozen car door

    really liked the above lines.very well written.impressive.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    December 23, 2008

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    Kathy, you caught the spirit
    of numbing cold and told it off
    in a snappy style!!! Kudos to you!!!

    M-C


  • Nicada silver member
    December 22, 2008

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    Very funny, and I love the take on the prompt. I'm pretty much hating winter myself right now. Wind chills here have been 20 below..Brrrrrr Great job on this poem, and my best to you in the contest. Stay warm. blessings, Patty


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    December 22, 2008

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    Oh...I am so with you on this one! It is -35 here...my hot water froze...my car won't start! Isn't it lovely? Ya right!!! Pam


  • Maureen silver member
    December 22, 2008
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    Funny!

    Loved your funny poem! I feel the same way you do..Winter is for the birds (and I'm sure they don't like it either!) I want an early spring!!! I want to be someplace warm RIGHT NOW! It's only just begun and I've had my fill of it already!

    Good Luck in the contest (even if it isn't about winning or losing)!

    Have a good day! (Yeah, right!)

    Hugs,
    <3 Maureen


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 22, 2008

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    l.o.l.

    yeah, isn't it lovely? love this sis! very funny very
    sarcastic and boy did that pic bring back those cold memories, that i for one don't miss one bit!! l.o.l.
    now that's LOVELY!

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