Beneath the oak tree and the moon
a lady is being released
all the pain will escape her heart soon
and all others will be so pleased
Dirty damsel from the deep south
lays with her arms folded tight
sorrow hints the edges of her mouth
as she throws in the towel tonight
A single tear for the one she loves
hangs softly upon her cheek
a voice calls out its not enough
And her heartbeat has gone weak.
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Posted for Passions Promise by Jeff Green
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Love and miss you hun
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i think this is something my friend, something that you did a wonderful keep it flowing
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Oh I need to know if you are ok hun... C
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This is truly heartfelt sis you did a wonderful job with this piece!!! I can feel the emotion in this piece!!! You did a wonderful job portraying this!!! Ur details and descriptions are perfect!!! The flow is excellent!!! I love your word choice this is phenomenon!!! I love it!!!! I LOVE U AND MISS U SIS!!! BIG BIG HUGS!!!!!!!!!
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omg!!!
this seems such sweet dispaire.
a loved lost is never regained but only re-born. and a loss is never truly a loss my sweet.
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Awww, iagree with the other commenter, please stay with us Passion. We all need you. We love you.
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oh...
god..please..I hope this isn't what it sounds like..
Tell her she's always in my heart please..
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