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My friend became a....

I'm sitting here alone again.
Thinking about all the  things you ever said.
You used to be my friend.
My friend to the end.
But now you changed my friend.

At 13 you became plain mean.
17 became homecoming queen
15 I didn't talk to you no more.
My  friend turned into a w***e

You started  makeup that was just to dark.
Making out with guys at the park.
Smoking  when it turned dark.
Wearing jeans that were just to tight.
Saying things that just weren't right.

At 13 you became plain mean.
17 became homecoming queen
15 I didn't talk to you no more.
My  friend turned into a w***e

Now you call me after  a long few years.
You can barely speak through your broken voice and tears.
He said  he's  hurting you.
That everyone has turned  their backs.
And how you want my friend ship back.
And I simply reply back.

At 13 you became plain mean.
17 became homecoming queen
15 I didn't talk to you no more.
My  friend turned into a w***e

Where's you're popularity  now?
17 became homecoming queen
15 I didn't talk to you no more. When  you walked out the door with him.
Even though you said you didn't love him.

At 13 you became plain mean.
17 became homecoming queen
15 I didn't talk to you no more.
My  friend turned into a
w**r*

Author notes

This poem/song is about these two girls who used to be best friends and then the one girl turned for the worest.

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  • Anu-Nataraj
    January 27

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    so imaginative !

    but still so good !! ..although i said no words such as w***e...this is not quite what i expected...butt hats a good thing..i like surprises !..good one !!

    very personal but immensely productive write !

    keep writing !
    we need good talent like this !!!

    good luck to u in the contest


  • Powered by Tofu
    December 25, 2008

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    what does w**e stand for?
    and is this about the one you debbiday and i call, "red light" perhaphs? l's
    i wouldn't be surprised, except, yea right like ANYONE would EVER vote for her for homecoming queen.
    good write nikki!!!
    xoxo,
    --gooshawn<3


  • Innocent-Lies
    December 22, 2008
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    good write.

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