Days come and go, more painful each and everyone without you here
No more will I hear you talk, laugh, cry, anything...
How much I wish you were with me here...this pain is too unreal
I held your still body, hoping for signs of life, but knew there were none
My heart shattered completely, my world came crashing down
What came next was an awakening, my shell was gone replaced by my true self
You held me hand when I fell down from above, crashing into the flower bed below
If not for you, I would've been lost on my own
You gave me so much to yearn for, so much to love....and now you are gone
Now it is my turn to take your hand and I'll take care of the rest
Once I kill him, the rest will be up to you in saving this dying planet..
He took so much away from me, my mother, my home, and now you...he must be stopped
Author notes
An attempt to write about Cloud's broken and grief stricken mind and heart about his blame of Aeris' death. Not finished, but I feel like it is horrible and I will finish it later...
What do you all think so far?
What part didn't you like or agree with?
Comments
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Hey you fixed it.Awsome! And yes I agree with ally poor cloud
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Poor Cloud.
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It's ok.I think you can do better though.
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