Just be sure when you say
" I love you "
Its a sin to tell a lie.
Millions of hearts have been broken,
Just because these words were spoken.
I love you, yes I do. I love you
If you break my heart I'll cry.
So be sure it's true when you say,
" I love you."
It's a sin to tell a lie.
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beautiful piece ♥
"Just be sure when you say
" I love you "
Its a sin to tell a lie."
....Amazing introduction to a genius piece of work here. Loved it!
Everyone needs to understand how to be more sensitive to one's feelings and being.
I totally understand the emotion in this poem!

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Wow, I think that this is amazing. It's simple, but true. It has deep meaning to it. I've felt like this before.


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Very well written.
I understand totally.

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I ♥ this poem. A lot of people that I know have been tricked with these words. I haven't had a BF yet cuz I don't want to get tricked with these words, and other reasons. Anyway, good job, I can never think of a poem as good as this!


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We love, we pain, and we learn. There are many levels of love and sometimes it takes time to really understand it. This is great. Simple yet very meanful.


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Uh huh, but there are 'degrees' of love, would you not agree? Nice write


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love the shortness
its to the point instead of drawn out
thnks for speacking for the rest of us out there -
it's short but represents so much, i've been hurt ALOT by people who have told me they love me. good poem

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Very simply stated, and so true!

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(Oops! I see I already commented on this poem!!! I still like it! )A very short, and a very sweet poem, almost childlike (NOT childish!) I really, really enjoyed this piece! bravo!
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Lyric, poignant and some very sage advice if we could or would, only listen to it and heed its words.... bravo...


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