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It's A Sin To Tell A Lie


Just be sure when you say
" I love you "
Its a sin to tell a lie.

Millions of hearts have been broken,
Just because these words were spoken.

I love you, yes I do. I love you

If you break my heart I'll cry.
So be sure it's true when you say,
" I love you."
It's a sin to tell a lie.

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  • Ali - Pie
    February 12

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    beautiful piece ♥

    "Just be sure when you say
    " I love you "
    Its a sin to tell a lie."

    ....Amazing introduction to a genius piece of work here. Loved it!
    Everyone needs to understand how to be more sensitive to one's feelings and being.
    I totally understand the emotion in this poem!


  • Ryan79
    February 11

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    Wow, I think that this is amazing. It's simple, but true. It has deep meaning to it. I've felt like this before.


  • The Drifter
    February 2
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    Very well written.
    I understand totally.


  • Moonlight95
    January 25

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    I ♥ this poem. A lot of people that I know have been tricked with these words. I haven't had a BF yet cuz I don't want to get tricked with these words, and other reasons. Anyway, good job, I can never think of a poem as good as this!


  • Myjoy gold member
    January 25

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    We love, we pain, and we learn. There are many levels of love and sometimes it takes time to really understand it. This is great. Simple yet very meanful.


  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    January 24
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    Uh huh, but there are 'degrees' of love, would you not agree? Nice write


  • SmotherMe
    January 24

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    love the shortness
    its to the point instead of drawn out
    thnks for speacking for the rest of us out there


  • addicted-flaw
    January 24

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    it's short but represents so much, i've been hurt ALOT by people who have told me they love me. good poem


  • ciarrai-manning
    January 23
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    Very simply stated, and so true!

  • Eusebius
    January 12

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    (Oops! I see I already commented on this poem!!! I still like it! )A very short, and a very sweet poem, almost childlike (NOT childish!) I really, really enjoyed this piece! bravo!

  • Eusebius
    December 22, 2008
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    Lyric, poignant and some very sage advice if we could or would, only listen to it and heed its words.... bravo...

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