One of the worst crimes on the earth is when your passion is not for you to decide.
When every thing that is done is monitored, speculated, disected, observed, detected.
What can one do in these situations?
The person's heart has been taken to another, not by choice, will, or fate, but love.
And as all would do, we go to that love with open arms, with nothing left in our minds
but to grasp it, embrace it, no, practiacaly smother it.
Just to have it, to have them,
heart to heart
together.
I did not choose my passion, but I love it. No matter the costs;
I would go to the ends of the earth for that passion.
And snatched from me...
I may have to.
The future of life hangs in the balance, and I ask un to you. Would you let that passion
go?
A shameful notion it would be, and quite slanderous.
I know that anyone would go for that passion given the chance.
Unknown to you, you all have that chance.
And I intend on taking mine, I will perserver, I will survive, and I will have that
passion
Author notes
tare it up, I just through something down to comemerate my return
go on, anything is accepted
Comments
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“Disected, practiacaly, and perserver”
should be
“Dissected, practically, and preserver.”
And in the notes: “tear” and “commemorate.”
Sorry for being a spelling Nazi. Two years of Mr. Walker’s grammar and spelling boot camp has made me OCD for such things. I naturally have horrible spelling, so I understand. May I suggest typing your work in word and copy/pasting it into a post? That’s what I do.
“And snatched from me...”
That sounds a bit off to me…maybe “And if snatched from me.”
Truly, that is your call to make.
All in all, I like the emotion in this piece. It is quite logically written and you make very valid points. I would have liked to see a larger variety of word choice, but the simplicity worked nicely. I also like the analogy of passion representing love…or more importantly the person you feel love for. Very blunt yet sly referencing.
Overall enjoyable.
~Megan
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"One of the worst crimes on the earth is when your passion is not for you to decide."
Amen.
I love this.
And you misspelled 'tear' :]
-Mary
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