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I need it, I need it

you make me laugh
you make me happy
you make me confident
but you're just temporary

your fingertips I wanna feel
your face I wanna touch
your lips I wanna kiss
you cold embrace is what I need

you're the first one not to leave me
you're the first one who understands
you are the one I can trust every moment
you're the knife in my hands

blood dripping on the cold floor
my heart pounding for you every single time
I need you, I can't take life anymore
you're my lifesaver, and though you kill me
you'll always be the one I adore

yeah sort of an cutting poem, yay cheerful??

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  • Zannah
    January 19

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    im sorry you feel like this. We havent talked in a while, we should soon. Great write though, stay strong im here for you.


  • broken-angel
    January 2

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    you're the first one not to leave me
    you're the first one who understands
    you are the one I can trust every moment
    you're the knife in my hands

    blood dripping on the cold floor
    my heart pounding for you every single time
    I need you, I can't take life anymore
    you're my lifesaver, and though you kill me
    you'll always be the one I adore

    LOVE THIS ! can relate to this so much hun, an amazing write xx