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Reminiscence.

Those younger years of innocent wonder,
Remain untouched and proud.
And I can remember, and spare a smile
For the laughter of a contented mind.
As trees sway and friendships flourish,
I will allow a tear, for a past glory
And hold this sweet memory,
At hand with my heart.





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  • blue ampersand
    December 24, 2008

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    This is so sweet. I love the 'As trees sway and friendships flourish' line and the mood of the poem, like contentment and happiness but kind of bittersweet as well.

    Welllllll written


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    December 23, 2008
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    very well done
    great take on the prompt


  • shiratikva
    December 22, 2008
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    This is a philosophic poem. I like it.
    ''hold this sweet memory'' - I like this line

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