I see the seasons change
From my cage
In the garden of fallen dreams
Where everything is what it seems.
I die in the garden
So your heart won't harden
Like mine did so long ago
Your something I don't want to let go.
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I know its really short, but I'm not done with it yet.
what is your honest opinion
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i love the thought...actully its vry deep
its good short..has more impact...leave it short
personally i wouldnt use "fallen" dreams in this
cuz u are imprisioned and lookin out...and the garden is symbolic of hope and dreams ..not fallen dreams
cuz in the second u are dying in that garden...
only thru tragedy ppl learn compassion and love
and perhaps thats what the author is sayin...how he/she is helping the one talked about here
i love it
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