We’re not posing for a frisk
we have no guilt at all
so stop patting us down cop
because we’re holding up this wall.
You don’t believe what I’m saying?
So you think we’re out of whack?
Ok, the drugs are up, the dogs butt.
Have fun, getting a finger, up his crack!
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- SO, LIKE....WHAT'S HAPPENING HERE? by condor.
900 points, ended January 3, 2009, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
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very funny
keep writing
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Short and hilarious. The picture described this very well written piece. Thank you for entering and best of luck too y ou in the contest. Keepup the good work.
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v. funny !
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I loved this. It was very funny. well done.
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Oh dear
I enjoyed this. The picture and the poem were made for each other
Thanks for entering and best of luck to you!
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Haha I enjoyed reading this, made me chuckle. Very funny and the picture goes very well. Hilarious poem
Thanks for entering my contest and good luck!
-heva
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Oh, my. There's a double triste going on here. Clever and made me smile.
Well written for the most part.
Thank you for entering...
Warmly, CookieZeal
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LOL I enjoyed the humor in this poem. It suits the picture so well. The imagery is totally wonderful. Thanks for the entry.
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Oh oh....!
This is an interesting take on the pix prompt! A tad bit naughty but funny nonetheless! 
You certainly have a creative & warped mind. 
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Well done on this piece. I liked it and had a great laugh. Thanks for entering.
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lol. This morning that's how I looked but I was holding up my fireplace screen as the bolts had come loose from the stone and some of the stone broke free as well. Not so fun when there's a fire blazing inside. Good job!
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