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Thinking

Such thoughts run the mind
I tell them they say no
It's all your fault
But what do I do?
They say you think in vein
What if these thoughts are me
What if thinking is my soul
Whatif I'm not me?
I don't ask it
Because they have much logic
All I have is words
So I can write
But shouldn't I admit my mates
That I'm mad
That my soul is expired
I should no more see the dreams
As they say
I should watch the door
Not what's it made of
How it is or was?
They so true
And I now know
But still the satisfaction doesn't come
Still hanging
Perplexed
Unsure
They say I'm a man of words
I don't do deeds but only
"think"
And think a lot
But what do I do I'm like this
I'm all fake
I shouldn't think
I shouldn't?????

Author notes

These are just my raw emotions. First thoughts no check all raw.

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  • kamranAslam
    February 23
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    sister u r going so deep in poetry.really.thats so nice of u.

  • Saima
    December 24, 2008
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    simply great

    your thoughts and your poetry, you play with words, its simply great.