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Frank Baum dreams

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The tiger’s eye glitters green in the candelabra’s glare,

a patchwork girl sits, a lost princess in her mind;

Tik-Tok Tik-Tok she mouths to herself, as the shadows fade,

the absence of emeralds, sloughed rubied slippers.

 

All this Rinkitink and rattlebrain stuff, the chaff of printing presses

and limelight, the harsh lament for Sitting Bull,

the sighs of books tumbling from shelves (too high! too high!),

Nelebel and Molly Oodle chinwagging by the Yellow Ryl –

 

Hush, hush – silence for a magic-Lord in his own fantasies,

Van der Graaf iced-lightning, touched by a rich, verdant madness!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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I got a green satin grab-bag - the Great Oz.

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  • Malabu
    January 8

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    why would you need to ask for a trophy ? i've seen many on your fabulous writings in lanes contest...by the way, i begged for mine...i'm really not that great the writer you are...such like, this! congrates

    mal


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      January 8
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      I am trying to remember asking for a trophy... nope... don't think so. Glad you liked this one.


  • breedluv gold member
    January 5

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    This poem made me do some research, because I was so intrigued by your references. The more I read, the more I appreciated the thought that went into this poem. Wonderful.


  • Dalaney gold member
    January 5

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    clicking my heels three times..."there is no place like Scotland. There is no place like Scotland. There is no place like Scotland." You had one of the most difficult prompts, and yet, you flew with it. Thank you so much. Love, Lane


  • nancy drew
    December 31, 2008
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    awesome, mairi. youre such a badass, do you know that?


  • Mirthryl
    December 26, 2008

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    Enjoyed your harking backs, Frank L. Baum and Ruth Plumbly Thompson were delightful childhood friends. They were escape, and both you and the author note the absence of emeralds. Regretful "sloughed rubied slippers." The "chaff of printing presses and limelight" were also escapes from difficult times, including WWII. Diversions from other depressions, such as "harsh lament for Sitting Bull." I do not recall "Nelebel and Molly Oodle".
    What fantasies provided escape for the author, one wonders? Outstanding "Van der Graff iced-lightening" and "rich, verdant madness!"


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      December 26, 2008

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      Thank you. The reference to Sitting Bull has to do with an article Frank L Baum wrote in which he lamented the death of Sitting Bull, controversially, as the last spark of nobility in the degraded Native American nations, and concluded that the white race might as well exterminate the remnant, rather than leave them in their degraded state. No one knows what was in his mind when he wrote this - nowhere else did he show overt racism. Was it meant to be ironic? No one knows, but a hundred years later FLB's descendants apologised in public to the Lakota people.

      The poem was less a harking back, more an imagined churning of FLB's subconscious whilst asleep, hence his creations (Oz and otherwise, such as Nelebel, and Molly Oodle) mingle with the likes of the Sitting Bull issue, his love of the theatre, and so on.


      • Mirthryl
        December 26, 2008
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        Thank you for additional information, of which I was ignorant. I remember some of my children's high school teachers talking about The Wizard of Oz in context of commentary on the gold standard, farmers and industry, etc. I had never heard of the Sitting Bull article. I should not have guessed at racism, his clearly color-identifiable Oz-ians possessed noble or self-serving attributes as individuals, not as ethnic Quadlings, Winklings, Munchkins etc. Thank you for the info!


  • A60sMan
    December 22, 2008

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    "Van der Graaf iced-lightning" --- Merde! You don't know how much I would have liked to write that image. I am extremely jealous. I love the insanity of this piece and the sounds it conjours. Very nice!


  • Amera gold member
    December 22, 2008

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    I saw this contest but I don't do reserves (refuse to post a blank poem). So you drew a green satin bag? Well you took it and turned it into a pure delight in whimsy, magic and coined verbiage that breeds nothing but smiles.

    Love,
    Amera♥

    • Mairi bheag gold member
      December 23, 2008
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      I'm of much the same mind, but this time I wanted a wee bit of fun.

  • chordphrute
    December 22, 2008
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    yeah - nice, honey


  • IronMaiden1236
    December 22, 2008
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    Flipping Wanker@@@

    Queen to Rooks nook!! Mate!


  • Ariosto II. gold member
    December 22, 2008

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    follow the yellow brick road and look where it getsya!
    Kool write, Lady.You think Dorothy and Sitting Bull could ever get it on?

    OZMAZING!

  • Bad Bill
    December 22, 2008
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    I don't understand a word of this...but I like the way it sounds.

    Best of luck,
    Bill

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