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Happy Christmas 'Magical Man'

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What you see is what you get, hey, the fun's not over yet,
come on big boy drop defences, kick the door down, jump some fences,
undo all your inhibitions, let out naughty, sweet emmisions,
what you see is what you get, roll the dice and place a bet.

Pop those buttons (press all mine) stand erect, don't form a line,
boy I'm hot, my body's sizzling, need some honey, sliding, drizzling,
wrap me up with velvet, TIGHTLY, squeeze me, please me, kiss me nightly,
what you see is what you get, something good, you won't forget.

Take me underneath the tree, make my baubles shake with glee,
crumble chocolate between kisses, let me show you just what bliss is,
closer, closer, don't say never, disappear into forever,
what you see is what you get, you're entangled in my net.

Taste my steaming cherry pie, with each lick you make me sigh,
squirt some cream upon my nipples, (better than hot Christmas tipples!)
spiced mulled wine runs inbetween, where some other juice has been,
what you see is what you get, we've got time, so don't you fret.

What you see is what you get, (hey, I thought I won that bet!)
six hours later we're still rocking, many goodies fill my stocking,
bodies glazed in wine and honey, feeling good and kinda funny,
what you see is what you get, hey, the fun's not over yet.....

Author notes

I guess this is probably a lot more tame than what you're going to receive in this contest but you know me...I just dip my toe, I don't take the plunge like some!!!!

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  • onesugar gold member
    January 4
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    Congratulations on the bronze.
    ~sugar~

  • onesugar gold member
    December 26, 2008

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    I love this, absolutely brilliant,
    Good luck with this in the contest
    ~sugar~


  • Swtpoetryman
    December 23, 2008

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    WHERE THE FUCK DID MY COMMENT GO!

    I commented on this HOT & YUMMY piece, yesterday - and when I came back to play while reading this piece again - I noticed that my comment had disappeared as my cum will soon disappear too - on my tongue, in my mouth, and down my throat - when I finish my play and lick it off of my fingers thinking of tasting our steaming cherry pie and squirting my sweet cream on your nipples - and licking it up after to share with you with a long and creamy kiss. This had a wonderful flow and a fine rhyme and rhythm to JERK OFF to - and being the naughty man that i am - I've been taking advantage of that for the second day! LOL!!!! Maybe this is a little tame as you say BUt it is far from lame - and has passed my hardness test -
    twice - so far - hands down and we all know where!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

    If what I see is what I get - I loved what i saw here - the background and the sensual picture too - that went together beautifully with this fine piece, Baby!

  • twodie4
    December 22, 2008

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    WOW, this is something, I saw this contest and hurried of the page blushing
    Good luck
    All the best with this festive erotic write
    Emma


  • Legend silver member
    December 22, 2008

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    Excellent enjoyed every last word of it.There is so much reading between the lines here, that it makes it even more erotic than it appears. Wonderful piece of kinky Christmas fun Good luck in the contest

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