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In the Hymns

I've chosen to believe
In the dreams my mother holds
In the light that brings us close
And the breeze that pushes

I've chosen to believe
In the hope my mother unfolds
In the hymns that bind our souls
And the sun that warms

I've chosen to believe
In the love my mother shares
In the peace that shines
And the rain the cleanses

I've chosen to believe
In the faith my mother learned
In the warmth of winters burned
And the clouds that sheltered

I've chosen to believe
In the path my mother marked
In the fright of a life returned
And the snow that calms

I've chosen to believe.

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  • wattle silver member
    December 24, 2008

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    Ms Liquid, How beautiful to read your work. You must have a lovely mother. I'm sure she has a lovely daughter. Hope your Christmas season is wonderful (and warm). --- Thank you.


  • Mystieknightngail
    December 23, 2008

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    Totally awesome! :)

    Absolutely Beautiful. I can tell you see a lot in your Mother, it really inspires me to see more in people.