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Those Christmas Blues

I've got those Christmas blues here without you
I've got them whenever I think about you
Christmas lights so bright on a white christmas tree
Leaves me so lonely now you're not here with me

Those Christmas blues are here, I hear them calling
And there's no way to keep them from just stalling
I guess you'll be okay, opening gifts on Christmas day
But I'll be here without you and all those Christmas blues

I've got those Christmas blues here without you
I'm so sad and so blue when I think about you
I have nowhere to go, in this winter Christmas snow
I've got those Christmas blues and I don't know

Those Christmas blues like snow, keep on falling
And they fill me with sorrow it's so appalling 
But you'll be fine wrapped up tight
In your bed on Christmas night
While I'll be here wrapped up in those Christmas blues...

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  • redhanded
    December 22, 2008

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    aw this is such an emotional write. thanks so much for your entry best of luck to you in this contest and in the future.
    andi
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