I have run from the choice for so long
evaded my enemies by any means necessary,
cunning and trickery,
I have erased myself from this earth,
but their trenchant remarks still ring in my ears,
and run through my mind,
piercing my soul.
I must choose a side,
and the darkness in my heart has been discovered,
I am a stranger to my own emotions,
I do not know myself.
Where to go,
What to do,
Do I still have the strength to run,
when I no longer know,
who I am running from?
Author notes
i really dont know what this is about... it goes with my motto... i dont know what i was thinking about all i know is this came out... ha ha that rhymed...
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- Rounds! Tears of Blood and Ink by ladyhelenaofsorrows.
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Thank you for entering this! The ideas are all expressed very clearly and well, and the write has a strong simplicity about it. I do think that a little elaboration would benefit it, it is somewhat generic. Nice write!
-Lena -
great write. to me it's like 'you've been so tied up you don't know what you're doing anymore.' good idea. sorry i didn't respond to your msgs sooner (:
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