the snow never stops
it just drops and drops
the cold sensation
brings me insperation
brrrrrrrrr
it is so cold
the snow meshes with blood
sending shivers down my vein
the blade is now white
so hard to see
so i'll just... sit here and bleed
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What did you think
Comments
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a great poem so deep and powerful good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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nice poem
keep it up!
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i like the rhyming in the latter half of the poem. It was very sad, at least the emotion i got from it was very sad. I think it was written well with nice imagery. Great work.
Laura -
very nice
i love it!!!!!!!
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