To exceed the sympathy of flowers and greeting cards
I curve around my thoughts, then scribe on my heart.
From the charming of the rising sun
to the sighing of the evening sunset;
I wish you peace, love and happiness,
for living is an affection which only its
beholder understands of her sensuality.
As your life approaches yet another milestone;
know that all flowers bloom with elegance,
think not about how quickly you've aged;
instead, manifest within your heart's essence,
and all of your wishes will burst forth fragrance.
In endless circle of wishes, let there be harmony
for in your magnificence, all insignificance pale.
As the agony of life resides in those without friends;
know in me you have a friend who will always care,
and since today is your birthday, dear, I wish you well.
As I drift into pleasant ville to make you laugh;
I mind not turning myself into a joker or a fool,
as long as my corny lines reach through your soul
and graciously bless your cheeks with a white smile.
So dear friend, may you flourish against all odds.
Perhaps now, you are going through the presents;
invisibly, I send you a basket of flowers of your liking,
a candle and a hug for each year that you've lived,
and a succulent cake that presages the sweetness
of the years to come, may they be very sweet.
Please tell me what you think
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Very beautiful you always pour into peoples heart with your (your words) "corny lines". Great job on this poem. Have a beautiful day!
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and a succulent cake that presages the sweetness
of the years to come, may they be very sweet.
that line was so cute
your words always seem gorgeous
you used so many words with S in it I noticed
It was very sweet, loving, generous, kind and romantic and cute.
You know you better write one for me
for mine comming up in April
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birthday gifts in advance....thats so innocent...
lovely innocent words...
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I love the imagery here. Penned with perfection!
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Exceptional write here
Oh this is truly one of the best I have read in a long time .Bravo I would say it is perfect
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deserves 5 stars
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Extremely romantic.
A stunning piece that can only be written from a true poetic heart.
The sentiment was drawn on so articulately that I think it would be impossible to surpass.
Done in the fine tradition of undying love and friendship.
A Masterpiece.
I am honored that you took time to read my work.
Such a fine writer placing a comment is valued ten fold.
Peace,
Lowell Poe -
Beautiful
While reading it, i felt like those words were written to me. the lines really touches me. great jon -
From one soulful heart to another...
I truly am moved by your words in this Birthday wish. It's amazing and every word is breathtaking. I'm sure your friend will forever enjoy this moment that is livable thru your most precious words to her.
Thank u for sharing, all the best...
KaPricia
Happy Birthday Martine
may you be Blessed with many more to come.
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Beautifully Inscribed!
What a beautiful way to show you care on your friends birthday..so descriptive as the imagery flows richly through each line. You created a wonderful piece here, and no doubt she loves it. Thanks for sharing you, much love and light, Timothy aka poeticweaver~
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What a lucky lady to have such a beautiful
happy Birthday poem written for her.
I loved the metaphor in this.
Bell
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