We all have dreams and ideas,
We have desires and goals,
But now a days we have lost hope,
We move on and forget these things
The clouds of obstacles cloud our view,
And soon we are no longer flying but falling
As we lose our dreams,
We lose our wings too.
A contest entry
- Quote Prompt by WarrioroftheHeart.
700 points, ended January 5, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - very tough contest :P (don't just sit and enjoy your holidays without poetry ) by abuyi.
1400 points, ended February 22, 44 entries
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As we lose our dreams,
We lose our wings too... strong lines
i like this write.. it talks alot to me.. but its too short
thanks for entering it -
Thank you for entering my contest.
I like the perception that we ourselves can be angels so long as we keep our dreams, it is a very good way to take the prompt and I like both the positive message and the slight warning in the poem.
Short and to the point, concise with no extraneous words. Good luck and I wish you all the best in your future.
Adrian
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I enjoyed participating in your contest. Maybe I will again in the future, jah?
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Good take...
on the prompt dear! Trust this'll do well in the Contest. Nice flow throughout. It's so true...if we loose our dreams we fall into despair! Surprising insight for one so young!
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Thank you.
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