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Deep Within

Little Dancing Fairies Leave Glittering Footsteps Across My Dreams.

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Look closely..there are multiple meanings :-)
Written February 10th, 2004

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  • K-Dense
    February 19, 2005
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    Hey. A few months ago, you entered a one-liners contest. This is an offical invitation to join my own one-liners contest under the contest title JoinThisContestOrI'llPutAMobHitOnYourWholeFamily. Hope to see you enter!-Curtis Meyer
    PS Please feelfree to read any/all poetry posted on this site by k-dense (myself).

  • Gosia
    December 16, 2004
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    Wow, I agree, magical!! This is really great, i like it!! Its lovely, well done! Crys x


  • forgotten dream
    December 14, 2004
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    i really enjoyed this line. it's whimsical and magical, and leaves me with a smile on my face. nice imagery. and best of luck in the contest <33


  • Vickie J
    December 13, 2004
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    great one liner!!! so dainty and delicate, you almost want to whisper it as you read it


  • PrincessTigris
    December 12, 2004
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    LOL!! Well that's the main imagery The second point is that it is a reminder of childhood and dreams...the impossible dreams that children embrace..that's what it makes me think of, anyway ...but everythings open to personal interpretation!
    Thanks for the comment

    Princess


  • Keith
    December 12, 2004
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    I've looked closely, but I canna get by the fairie fowk. Dream on.

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