Roses are red
violets are blue
the sunshine is warm
the night is askew
Roses are red
violets are blue
I feel so lonley
here without you
Roses are red
violets are blue
nobody cares anymore
I am invisible and withdrew
Roses are red
violets are blue
I am the black sheep
I am coming un-glued
Roses are red
violets are blue
I am losing myself
inside of you
Roses are red
violets are blue
please come back home
I need you to
Roses are red
Violets are blue
our love is dying
I don't know what to do
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Roses are red
violets are black
our love was like a flower
and is now dark as ash
Roses are black
and violets are grey
it is a black and white world
everything ends the same
Roses are black
and violets are black too
everything is dying
I am losing everything I knew
Roses are black
and violets are black too
when everything used to be rosey
It is now dying for you.
A contest entry
- Rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrroses by ScreaminMime.
1750 points, ended January 3, 40 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Roses are red.... by Antebellum.
400 points, ended August 28, 11 entries
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Fantastic take on the prompt.
thanks for entering,
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thank you so much for your comment. it is greatly appreciated :] best of luck to you in the future and with your writing
andi
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Roses are red,
trees are made of wood.
Not big on the cutting,
damn, this was still good!
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Thought-provoking...
Very well crafted... one of the better entries, I say. 
Wishing you all the best in the contest!! Peace, Cyn
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thanks so much for your comment I truly appreciate it!
andi
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You're very welcome!!
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Love this poem here my friend, kind of holds a feeling to it that i know somewhat all to well, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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