should I die tomorrow…
plant me in a trunk,
in a musty old attic
so I can live among;
familiar things,
I was accustomed too.
Author notes
small thoughts
A contest entry
- 25 words (or less) by Melissa Gayle.
500 points, ended December 22, 2008, 18 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is great! It's always great to find
yourself in a familiar place. I guess even
in death. Congrats on your trophy Mal!
Jeremy0826 -
I adore this, the emotion is truly beautiful.
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such meaning and feeling here... X best wishes... x
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I know how this feels. Let me be around that which I loved and feel comfy with.
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small thoughts but big requests..lol hope you win this one, good luck
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lol get the trunk ready
merry christmas moons
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