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lunchtime

the sultry smile
      visible bra straps
      hitched up skirt
my heart beats faster
                        faster
                        faster
and then her 250 pound boyfriend
walks in
and i avert my gaze

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  • Lisa.
    January 4

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    wow this is funny hahahahaha its funny in a part "and then her 250 pound byfriend come in" lol you are the winner keep up the good work


  • Pollycheck
    December 25, 2008

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    Thank yoou for entering my contest. Now thisis funny and it actually caused me to laugh outload. Maybe I can relate to this poem too well!!!!!!

  • loki black
    December 21, 2008

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    I can relate, and it's funny and I liked it, and if you really like her, try talking to her when he's not there, you never know