Theres no Need to Complicate
This Time we Found
Let me Demonstrate
Our Love Profound
Theres not time for Hesitating
We can't Leave ourselves Waiting
Locked Forever in Our Hearts
We've been this Way from the Start
This Opportunity, Lets Shine
This Fortune its Yours
Not just one, But Mine
Nothing else will Ensure
Here we go Again
Can you Feel the Adrenaline
Rushing through my veins
My Soul can't Contain
This is Us
Forever We have Stayed
Theres Nothing to Discuss
No longer being Afraid
Theres no Need to Complicate
This Time we Found
Let me Demonstrate
Our Love Profound
Oh how I've Missed You
And I Know you Feel the Same
When I'm feeling Blue
You're Always there to Claim
The Best of Friends
This Love we Have Extends
Out Beyond their Reach
This accord, No One can Teach
I am Yours
You are Mine
Thats for Sure
A Perfected Design
♥A Crazy-Love=Thats what We Share
Author notes
I would like to mention that I was inspired by the words from a song, I'm Yours- Jason Mraz.
I have been writing, mostly when I'm sad and distressed lately, and I've completely neglected anything happy. So here is my attempt to write something more bright.
& please let me know if there is any way to make this better at all!! Because I am thinking of giving this to someone as part of their Christmas Present, since it is something from the heart.
Prompt #2!
A contest entry
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So, what do you think about this poem??
Comments
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truly is something from the heart theyll love it dear!! good write and very sweet
presents are fun to make..good luck thanks for entering and good luck to you!
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excellent write:]
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this poem is strong with love a nice flow to it again and again not to long with many emotions dancing through your words nice write xx
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This is very nice. I especially like the very last stanza. "I am yours, You are mine, thats for sure, a perfect design." Great stanza there. Well descriptive. Full of emotion. I like it. thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into this contest.
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awww this is ever so sweet!
I think you show a real dedication to love here.
I know that love is the most important thing in my life too. -
This is so heartfelt, sincere, and beautiful!
I really enjoyed reading it and thank you for
featuring it here! All the best to you in all
of these contests and take care!
Jeremy0826 -
It's Great!
Reading this on Christmas Eve, 16:38pm
in the uk, it's fabulous!
It flows greatly!
3 applauses!
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Since I am reading this on Christmas Eve, I think that I would be honored if my best friend wrote me something like this. Sadly she doesn't write poetry. You want constructive criticism? I don't think that I have any, The rhyme was not forced and flowed well. The repeat of the first stanza in the 6th was strategically well placed and very effective in the write. I loved this. Thank you for posting and sharing. Good luck in the contests that you have entered it into!
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I really like this!
It reminds me of when I had a best friend!
This is amazing!
My favorite lines are;
Oh how I've Missed You
And I Know you Feel the Same
When I'm feeling Blue
You're Always there to Claim
I am Yours
You are Mine
Thats for Sure
A Perfected Design
♥A Crazy-Love=Thats what We Share
I love then ending.
very nice!
-Erin -
The yellow makes my brain bleed
Seriously however I think its sweet.
The only part I'm stuck on is the line:
"You're always there to claim"
I'm not sure I grasp the meaning of that
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Lol, sorry. I'm obsessed with yellow pretty much.
And as for that line; Its saying that the person I'm talking about is always there to "claim" me as her friend. That no matter what, I'm her's.
And I'd also just like to say, thank you very much for the comment!
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this is really really good and i think it would make a great christmas present! the rhyming was good, i really like the pattern you used. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!
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Precious~
Aaaaaaaaaaaaw this is a Beauty of a piece versed and Happy is a good thing for many need to be given much to smile
about - You delivered
Excellent imagary and emotions evoked~
Love how You brought forth from within
Bravo!
I also Appreciate Your comment on my work
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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I am Yours
You are Mine
Thats for Sure
A Perfected Design
omg...!!!hopelessly romantic lines...
loved ur work...it reminds me of my love...and the hopeless love i have for him which doesn't dwindle at any time...
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Oh i loved this!!
And the song is one of my favorite songs i have worn that song completely out but yet i still love it , And this poem was absolutely stunning. Great imagery and alot of emotion.
"I am Yours
You are Mine
Thats for Sure
A Perfected Design"
^^^ My favorite of all stanza's!
Great job my friend, UhMayZING!
-Mandi
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A wonderful poem
So well penned and with such beautiful expressions -
very good
it was written well with good words
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