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the same fly
keeps landing on my nose
I think.







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  • drifting cloud silver member
    April 1
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    You made me chuckle.


  • Draig aine gold member
    March 19
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    LOL

    so hard to tell


  • ScarletO gold member
    March 10

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    LOL..this is funny. I have been browsing your haikus trying to think of a good one for your newest contest. You have some good ones.


  • Pollycheck
    December 23, 2008

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    Thank you for entering my contest. I really like haiku. I can relate to this one espicially when you are laying in bed and trying to fall asleep, but that stupid fly has other ideas for the evening.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 22, 2008
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    This is interesting.




  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 21, 2008

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    lol, kind of funny, i can just see that in my mind too, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

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