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Silence

Silence everywhere,
it surrounds you,
choking you,

But to me Silence is oh so golden,
Silence is one of the luxuries of life,
sometimes easy,
sometimes hard,

It has no definition,
it is not material,
yet it should be sought after,
if should be chased more than the most costly earthly gift,

Gifts may wear out,
but silence will always be ready to aid those who appreciate it.

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not my best but for some reason i like it... no idea why....

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  • Truthful Sinner
    December 22, 2008
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    Wow very insightful and very well written good job and welcome to AP and if u ever want to talk just send me a message.


  • ladyhelenaofsorrows
    December 21, 2008
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    interesting write, and i can really relate to this... i might look over the second stanza, it needs just a little work.. overall, very well done.


  • Py120
    December 21, 2008
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    odd

    its diffrent but i get it


    • cullen-writer
      December 21, 2008
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      thanx

      thanx..... it came out totally different than what i thought it would but ... *ahem* "I just write whatever is on the page... how am i supposed to know how it got there?"