His coat was all muddy and shaggy and brown
His eyes were as sad as can be
His little tail hung as he looked in the eyes
And he thought - is this human for me
The young man walked by without giving him thought
And the puppy he hung his head low
And he shuffled along on four weary sore paws
And he wondered where he would thus go
He walked down the street as the people passed by
They smiled but nobody could see
The want in his eyes and the train of his thought
As he thought – is this human for me
The night became cold and he shivered and shook
And he lay neath some bushes to sleep
And he dreamed of a day he would find him a home
And no more would this young puppy weep
When the morning came by – this young puppy woke
To a world that was passing him by
He was hungry and cold and his spirit was low
And the small puppy sat there and cried
Then a little girl passed with her father right then
And she stopped and she looked and could see
And she smiled as she turned to her father and said
Oh dad – is that puppy for me
Now the puppy he lives in a home full of love
And his eyes are as bright as can be
And he holds his head high as he thinks to himself
Yes – I knew there was someone for me
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aww thats so cute i love the puppy
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Thanks, mate.
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Aww! cute, sense of warmth and belonging
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Thank you so much. Nothing more adorable than a cute little puppy.
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puppy love perfection
I take care of a man with alzheimers and I fell
in love with his little dog Samantha.
We three play together.
R. Diem
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I never saw this reply from january the 18th and I apologise. What caught my attention was the fact that you said you three played together. That is such an endearing comment that made me smile. You are a treasure!
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As usual, you are so good at rhyming a story. Puting in the little things thad make the story real.
( And he shuffled along on four weary sore paws)
Another great write. I loved it..
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Excellent
A wonderful creation. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.
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Sweet
Beautifully expressed write, as usual, highly enjoyable read.
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Thanks, mate. Glad you liked it. Your comments always appreciated.
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Wow this is so so so good!!! I can't even describe!!! This is absolutely adorable you did a very very wonderful job with this piece!!!!! I love the way you portrayed this!!!! Excellent details and description!!! Ur words are outstanding!!!!! This is incredible and so so so super sweet!!!!! I love the imagery!!!!!!!!!! Well done!!!!! Merry Christmas and happy new year my friend love and hugs!!!!!!
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Condor
Well, this poem is for me as well! Nice story and nice poem too! You told it just right. You're going to make some kid very happy reading this one. You did this kid anyway!
John
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I am so pleased that you liked this one. It is actually one of my favourites.
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This is a lovely little tale of love and kindness. very well done, both in message portrayed , and poetic content.
The poem bounces along to its happy ending.
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Thank you. Your comments are really appreciated.
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that was soo sad i loe that u gave it a happy ending though. -
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Thank you, mate. I am so glad you liked it. Your comments were appreciated.
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