I lay in bed of night...thoughts seeking answers...
but yet I am given no reply...light falls upon my soul...
on which I rely...darkness is rising...it breeds pain...
that is something I will not show...am I lying here in vain?
the tempest in my blood accelerates...breathing becomes heavy...
thoughts of you are exhilarating...almost sufficating...
you breath air into my lungs...you give me life...
what have we done? All we can do is try...
heartbeat begins to cease...my mind begins to shut down...
my soul is being released...into your bounds...
I submit to your touch...you give way to my embrace...
time comes to a stop...now we are face to face...
years it has been...long have we awaited this day...
tears stream from our eyes...alas we can feed...
our starved desires...as our hearts begin to race...
for the first time...in several decades.
" I'm in love with a beautiful woman
that I have never met, I have
given her my heart, my soul,
my mind and spirit...the only
thing left is my body
and last breath. "
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A contest entry
- Love and Joy by Sarin Rayne.
650 points, ended June 9, 17 entries
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This is beautiful my friend.I truly enjoyed reading this piece of work.Good luck in the contest
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This is a very touching poem, and I enjoyed reading it very much.
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wow
This is a great write, wonderfully written, very well done
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interesting style Mike, it gave a few pauses probably hinting that it took a you a little while to write it?
ny ways it was good,had flow, punctuation and man it set the imagination free in all directions then lol
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Oh, so pretty, and thoughtfull... Good luck, by the way... Eh nevermind, i dont have a favorite part.. it was all good, my apologize... ^-^
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wow this is a really good poem. nice jo
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Beautiful. Nice poem. I like the style of your piece. Very original. Not many people can pull it off.
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One day, it will come true.
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Aye, love. We like.
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