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Within Us, Heaven Waits

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Believe in me that trust shall be a part,
Of every word I say and mood you show
My actions will enable you to know,
That loyalty for me, be love at heart.

Desire me for all the things unseen,
For beauty can decieve and this denied
Contains those magic moments you have cried,
Your feelings are adored my beauty queen.

Ignore the smile for happiness inside,
Is more important reaching like you do
My understanding is, that I am you;
And in return, for each we shall provide.

Deliver me the goods for welcomes home,
And in return the welcome home shall reach
A closeness that indeed can claim a breech,
Of souls that one on one can come from.

While adoration moves me to content,
It leaves me with those feelings dying has
And while my dear, this love inspires alas,
It breathes along on drifts of heaven sent.

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  • wave1080
    November 30
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    Awww

    Beautiful I love the rhyme and flow of this .


  • trekkergirl
    December 22, 2008

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    sweet

    I love this one. Totally romantic. Good imagery. Lots of wonderful emotions. Flows beautiful. Great job. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 21, 2008

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    Where this this one come from a great job and golden work my friend, seriously, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 21, 2008

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    bravo..

    Yet another beautifully penned piece by you, a nice flowing and image filled piece of romance. well done my friend! lots of luck in the contest..