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what a girl to do

I tried
to explain
yet so much i held back
in fear of rejection
Hoping she would only understand
Yet i had a doubt
so i kept every thing in
No i sit in regret
wishing i would of took the chance
yet again  i didnt
Now she is 40 miles away
i feel heart broken
with tears running down my face
i only wish
she knew how i felt.
But what girl to do?

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