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Don't F$%k With Me Today

You are gone;
no wind, sails faded.
I am still,
unmoving.

You walked;
every step stomped
on my heart, enraged.
I am losing.

Love her, hold her;
who cares about
your daughter.
We are left
behind.

The water;
rippling now.
The waves are gone.
I'm alone,
stuck in time.

You once loved;
the sun shined
on us...
together.

How could you;
How could I have known
our love could not
weather.

By: Amy Royal


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  • Johnny Wheeler
    December 23, 2008

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    Haunting

    Your words speak of pain I knew intimately, more than I'd like to remember, pain such as that is a lingering pain. Time does indead heal, but scars are them remnants we carry like badges.
    Johnny


  • LionessK silver member
    December 22, 2008
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    Loved the fourth stanza... awesomely done.