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His Goodbye

Dancing swift though the open air,
on rainbows edge's loving prayer,
the lights of night can dazzle eyes
when they sparkle through his dark hair.

All through the early morning skies,
in hues like liquid gold that flies,
his pearly gaze stares off too space
then breaths his shining soft goodbyes.

And though the holes that did erase
with spider thin threads soft as lace,
I watch his body drift away
yet cannot meet his quickening pace.

So with an ease he'll swiftly sway,
and fade into the light of day.
Before my soft and tearing stair,
he's cast into her dark decay.

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  • tears.of.silence gold member
    April 16, 2009

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    very lovely. I loved the words written in this poem. Great work indeed. You've got a total of 15 for this poem bringing your total to 63. Thanks for entering the contest and best of luck to you. kahy


  • LoveLikePoetry
    December 21, 2008
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    That was amazing
    I love your poems sooo much


  • Mrs. Priester
    December 21, 2008
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    OoO

    pretty!!!!!