Tales unheard, stories untold,
so many mysteries this
cold ground holds...
So much of this world
can be seen with our eyes...
so much there is yet to uncover.
So many questions yet to answer
Right above our head the answers hover...
Why then can't we see them?
Why is it all a mystery?
Why does it all hide?
Will the Earth reveal itself
when all time is history?
So much to know,
oh pity, oh woe,
so many secrets
everything as mysterious
as a candle not been lit..
yet still aglow!
Why don't we know?
Do we not have a right?
Are we outsiders to our world?
In this darkness, I see no light!
Author notes
not so good but...... yeah.
A contest entry
- Easy quickie ♥ by Kathraina.
965 points, ended January 4, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think? Be honest, now!
Comments
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wow jahnavi!
this is very, very, very good!
you have definitely grown up in your writing.
my favorite line is:
"when all time is history?"
its just beautifully fantastic.
i always love poems with a lot of questions...
great job!
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This is fantastic!
I love it. it is very true I can relate to this poem very much it speaks to me.You managed to keep a fantastic flow all the way through you'r ryhmeing sounds natural it dosn't sound forced. It is wonderfull. you really have a way with words. I love how you stated it off with so many questions and then at the end you twisted it with an exclemation "in this darkenss,I see no light"
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Very good write. I enjoyed it. Great flow and good imagery. Great job, and good luck in the contest
♥ Kathraina -
this is not good its, GREAT
this is really good ,this is my favorite line everything as mysterious
as a candle not been lit..
yet still aglow!
this is pure gold!!!!!!
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