I see your beautiful blue eyes, gazing back at me,
while we lay on the bed, whispering sweet nothing into
eachother's ears. I can't believe the things you
say, make me so, turned on, for my desire for you.
I slide my hand, up your flawless thigh, smirking slightly,
as I plant my lips to yours.
I feel the breath, of love, escape our lips. As we push together,
for the time, we are one, I feel our love, with every thrust, every push,every love sound, that escapes our lips.
Panting now, we are finished, making love. I lay back, and close my eyes,as I realize, how much I love you.
My first, I guess, you can say, erotica. Please, tell me how you think it was?
Comments
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Awe this was so ...hmmm
well definately a great write pen on poet
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Ooh La la!
xD
I likey I likey.
See, the thing is, most erotica's I read are all about like how sexy and kink people make it out to be.
But this one is different. This one shows the love behind what happened, and you can tell it wasn't just written love, but that it is REAL love.
Unless you just wrote this and it never happened...in that case very very believable, which is a good thing because the believable poetry is what has the most impact.
Anywho. I like the smirking part, it makes it fun, yet the love is still contained.
:] Great write, truleh.
{three Clapper dudes plus three of her own clapper dudes}
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Very nicely written. It was sweet and it seemed like you really love someone
I'm glad.
Or maybe youre just still a perv afterall
love you JR
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