Santa has heroin tracks,
from shootin up under the mistletoe,
broken homes and seperation,
I guess that goes to show,
that miracles don't happen,
no such things as happy endings,
love and Christmas wishes, really are just myths,
with everything they said,
I thought I really did know,
but in the end their fairytales,
are buried beneath the snow.
Fa la la, forget this lie,
a little more debt,
and another high,
Santa shootin up,
I guess this goes to show,
ther is a deeper meaning,
when he says "HO HO HO".
Just remember all the good years,
when you really believed,
before you finally realized,
and saw past the deceit,
remember when you really thought that magic did exist,
think back to when there was a Santa,
before all of this.
Author notes
Just a short little poem. From experience. Nothing great. Just I hate the holidays. This may help you understand why, just a lil bit better.
A contest entry
- Christmas Pre-writes by Judith Chandler.
700 points, ended December 22, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i love it, its awesome just pure awesome. =3 i feel the same ways about the holidays.
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A sad comment on the way things are now. So many people are addicted and maybe Santa is too from too much pressure or whatever.
An original take on Christmas and there certainly have been times when I've hated this time of year as well. Too many expectations.
Thank you for entering my contest. -
OOOOHHHH!!!!
DEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENG!
I LOVE this.
This is totally my fam. :[
I love it love it love it.
The rhyming was amazing.
You better win this contest.
Acause if you don't. Then. I be sad. Yo.
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Thankies sissa.
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wow sav sav i liked it it was sum thing diffrent that anyone would most likely write about christmas well love you and i liked it alot
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wow this is daaarrrrkkkk really. It's really kinda sad . Paints a horrible picture of a lost of innocence and of trust. It really brought it home when I read your authors notes. Good job
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Thanks so much Jaydin.
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lol this is fucking hillarious
i love it
and santas a fat bitch too
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Thnx B. Wasnt meant to be funny. But im glad someone read it.
Santa is a fat bitch. FUCK him.
MMFWCL4LMF.
Down For Lyfe,
Cyanide.
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