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One

Beside a fire, we will meet,
bodies entwined, LUST, HEAT!
Writ6hing, sweating, becoming one,
release is far away, we've just begun.

I kiss your lips, your neck, your chest,
your body feels good,
I'm at my best!
My hot, wet tongue in deep caress.

With my mouth I feel your need,
across my lips you spill your seed.

You enter me slowly, easy in stride,
settling in for one hot ride!
The intensity of your stroke
is now more alive!

I'm cumming HARD! I'm cumming FAST!
I want this feeling to last and last!
You make me WET! You make me HOT!
You drive me crazy, with what you got!

We take a little break, psych ourselves out,
to do it again, without a doubt!
This is great and so much fun,
writhing sweating, becoming ONE!

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  • The imagery here in this erotic piece is very very strong. I like the rhyme and the flow of the piece. You obviously have a great talent for this genre of writing and you should nurture it. Great piece this is.

    *Writ6hing*, sweating, becoming one,

    Should be *WRITHING*

    Dark Wishes
    Wayne Leon


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 24

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    Very Sensual

    What a wonderful poem to stir the senses. So lovely and a delight to read. Take cares, Smiles, Sandy


  • poeticweaver gold member
    January 5

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    Nice Cuz.

    Bravo, and congrates on the HM!
    A kinky christmas eh?
    Pen on, and keep the kink, lol.


  • Swtpoetryman
    December 21, 2008

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    BECOMING ONE, INDEED!

    THANK YOU for entering my VERY MERRY & KINKY CHRISTMAS CONTEST as the gift of love and lust is the greatest gift of all for a very naughty but OH SO NICE boy like me! HE! HE!
    Have a wild and wet one!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.