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Music

Music is my life,
The beats and sounds
keep me alive.
From Pop to Rock
Hip Hop to Jazz
The sounds is like
my heartbeat.
Without the sound
I shall encounter defeat.
The rythm is like my body
without it i cannot move.
Music is my friends
without my friends
My life ends.
Music is my life
the headphones on my ears
and the music at high volume
Without my music it shall
be that starting of my fears.


Author notes

Hope you liked the poem! well right now i was just thinking of all the people who love music...so i just wanted to write a poem about music crazy people cause sometimes i tend to be that way (haha)

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  • alex301
    April 18

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    hey very nice poem! you made some spelling mistakes though, but i guess natty is contagious ha ha! I didn't know you liked music that much though! im not sure if you still come on all poetry ( this is the first time i've been on in ages) but i hope you do!


  • SwimForBetterDays.
    February 25

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    this is cute. The poem is very descriptive and I liked your metaphors as well. Great job =]
    keep up the good work
    gabi


  • kathykool
    December 24, 2008
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    Haha funny nice job my friend Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!!


  • cupcakealia
    December 24, 2008
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    Its a good effort i think

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