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Universal Wanderer.

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Universal wanderer
reaching for the stars
searching for tomorrow
Jupiter or Mars

Butterfly connections
floating into space
gossamer reflections
wingtips painted grace.

Shooting star illusion
inside a blackened sky
interstellar wishes
born to never die.

Fly me to wherever
take me to a star
fly me through a sunbeam
take me where you are.



                 
                                   

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 22, 2008
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    Perfect rhyme, flow and take on the picture.
    Best wishes in the contest.
    Gaylene


  • owlish
    December 21, 2008

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    The rhyme and flow of this piece is absolutely perfect! This is an amazing take on the picture. You also end the piece beautifully - 'fly me through a sunbeam / take me where you are.' A surreal poem for surreal artwork! Thanks so much for you entry, best wishes!