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Forgotten Dreams

Dreams faded like denim

They look better in full color

 

Love hazy like a drunken fool

Can only mean hardship and trouble

 

Wanting a sense of security

Like virus protection for a computer

 

Wanting freedom

Like third world counties

 

Hoping to smile on the inside once more.

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  • Patpowers silver member
    July 11
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    Well versed and written...you did an excellent job on this piece!


  • queenie
    April 13

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    this is so different and in a very good way.it has a tinge of sadness but it is very powerful in its delivery.


  • XxYoru-OkamixX
    December 26, 2008
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    this is original. i like it very much. great job ^^