Oh God
You are never irritated
never repulsive
constantly affectionate
unceasingly basic and
clean
despite our slips
you are a Simon-pure nucleus
a childlike soul
raising your silky hands to bless us
time immemorial
Oh God...
Author notes
My name is PrabhuDayal Khattar
Prompt: hands like silk
In a list
A contest entry
- touch me by ratkos.
925 points, ended January 9, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hGod...
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you poem makes me all warm inside
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Thank you for your refreshing inspirational read today, focusing on the one who is worthy in our words and praise...Bravo! and for your silver trophy!
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Enlightening :: Your reminder is welcome !! God is truely the one to Behold
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Short and powerful!
Very beautiful, a really deep read for the soul inside us all...thanks for sharing!
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Wise-Wonderful-Profound...
Well said... "a childlike soul..." sings to eternity in bliss.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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Aww I like this soo much! Im only 15 and i reccently began reading the Holy Bible and the stories that are told are inspirational and a genuine show of His kindness and forgivinness
I liked this poem very much -
Inspirational
Free Verse, universal concept, nicely done. -
When the love in your heart touches a soul,
The unity of friendship means you never walk alone -
i have seen many of your contests and i am deeply flattered that you entered this. a truly beautiful poem accompanied by a perfect picture.hand in hand they define greatness...thank you
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For He is indifferent...perfectly indifferent...it is we who 'slip' and fall in the mud, so to speak...interesting concept. Peace, Rhonda
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great work in simple, straight-forward strokes...your words simply shine with innocence and beauty. congrats and best regards, spiritual poet.
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Your words are always different but always you say the same - your imprecision and your love and faith for Him. Another great written poem.
~Sonja~
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beautiful sentiment dear friend. especially liked this part:
"...despite our slips
you are a Simon-pure nucleus..."
Paul
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GOLD, GOLD, GOLD!
Oh, dear friend, this is such an awesome piece reflecting the Truth of God. . . and His Christ! The one message I repeat so frequently is the simplicity of God and Christ: they are not these "impossible dieties to please," as so many denominations teach. Rather, they would have their followers believe that of God and Christ as an excuse to keep sinning. It is like spitting in the face of our generous and gracious Father.
As I said in the "verdict," this piece should and must garner the gold, as truth always should. Thank you for this reminder of who and what is my Father and His Christ, our Saviour. In the midst of the trials Satan has placed upon me in the past year and a half, there are times when I truly need such reminders; those times when the going is so rough that I find myself wanting to just give up: yet, I know He has never dropped me and never will.
Much love and hugs, SisBon
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A childlike soul...attracted me to your poem...and truly He is all you say and more...we can agree....You have characterized Him so well...love your imagery...We remember how he loved the children....He has our heart...especially even more at this time of year as He came as a child....Bravo for the write!
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Oh OurGod
This is so absoultly beautiful my friend
If truer words have been spoken I have yet to read them
May we thank our God for being so true so giving
and so forgiving.
This ia a priceless peice of work.
Thank you for the peace of mind just reading these words my friend.
And good luck in this contest.
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Hi
It has been a while since I have come to AllPoetry and I saw your name. I read your poem and I wanted to tell you that I can see that you are growing in your writing from when I was here last. I am glad to see that you continue to write and this is very well written and presented. Keep writing!
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