Maybe if -
we slip into concoction
~our~ dreams
won't be forgotten
Maybe if -
we sip silk p.o.i.s.o.n
~our~ serpents
would slither stronger
If maybe -
doesn't stain ~our~ souls
If maybe -
doesn't become acid rain
A contest entry
- DIRTY [P.r.e.t.t.y] WHORE by Candy Morphine.
550 points, ended January 6, 34 entries
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Comments
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oh this is great. short but so enticingly sweey.
the second last stanza was perfect, it really captured the whole poem in two lines.
great!
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dirty on my mind lol and still so very pretty
~Luce
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Hmmm... A thoughtful little ditty to provoke the mind, wheels to churn into a dirty pretty web. Nice write!
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i really love this great job! love how ypu worded it and the lines
Maybe if -
we sip silk p.o.i.s.o.n
~our~ serpents
would slither stronger
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great work. especially if this was a pic prompt as you last comment mentioned. maybe always plagues the mind, i love how you brought it to life
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good take on the prompt my friend
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if maybe doesn't stain our souls .... hmmm like that, almost sounds the same as someone [me] ha ha driving them selves with "what ifs"
hehe great write, appearantly you're a dp whore eh...hehe
Tasha
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ha ha
Naw i'm just a poetry whore.
*lick*
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