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Mummy, come home

Mummy, what about me? I miss you,
You haven't been here to comfort me
Or even fill my bowl with lovely food,
I feel scared mummy,
I  miss you and I always will love you,
Come home and bring the baby ,
I feel lonely, I am on my own,
Come home and hold me in your warm arms again

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    December 26, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie


  • leeshylou
    December 22, 2008

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    aw I bet this will be exactly how my son feels when its time for new bubs to be born.
    Good luck in the contest


  • Laura
    December 21, 2008

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    wow lori this is brilliant, its good to see that your bringing more emotions into your poems. well done mum xxx